This week's Write On Edge post was pretty laid back and easy. In 500 words, write a piece of fiction or non-fiction which includes the phrase: to the moon. Since I'm hoping to get Snapshots published by mid to late July, I thought I'd write something for it.
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To the moon! Jacob pointed to the glowing light bulb above
our heads. A wide grin filled his face and hope shined in his eyes.
The hope caused my throat to tighten. Keandra was right.
Jacob didn’t fully understand just how bad this place was. And I envied him for
it. Envied that he could detach himself from the reality of our confinement and
get lost in his imagination. The light above was from the moon and in his head
and we were flying towards it.
Pushing those feelings back, I pick Jacob up. “Prepare for
take off in ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four,” Jacob held his arms at
his sides. His body trembled with excitement, “three, two, one. Blast off!”
Jacob squealed as I spun him around. I took him around the
room and then lifted him up.
“Don’t touch the light bulb – I mean the moon – it’s hot,” I
warned.
Jacob giggled and heat radiated off his skin. You’re so
silly, Big Brother. Prepare for the landing.
I landed him on the couch. “That’s one small step for man,”
I said as he climbed off the short couch like he was descending a ladder. When
his foot hit the floor, I stopped him. “There’s no gravity on the moon. Do you
know how to walk?”
He shook his head.
“Watch me.” I bent my knees and took long, slow steps.
Delight shone in Jacob’s eyes as he mimicked me. “You also have to be careful.
Jump too high and you’ll float away.”
I chuckled as Jacob grinned mischievously. He coiled his
legs and jumped. I grabbed him and lifted him up. “Oh no! You’re floating away.
Someone help before you float to Uranus. Keandra, help!”
Keandra’s eyes widened, panic flitting across her face as I
swung Jacob towards her. I passed him gently to her and she set him safely on
the floor. He slowly bounced away, declaring he was off to find alien life.
Keandra glared at me once he was out of sight. “I thought
you were going to throw him at me.”
“Have a little faith in me,” I said sourly. I pulled apart
the blanket fort Jacob and I made for the cowboy adventure before he turned into an astronaut.
“In the gang, family was important. If someone was falling, you caught them.”
“What’s that got to do with this place?”
I looked at Keandra. “The only thing we have in common is
Master. We’re alive because of him.”
“So, does that make him our father?”
“No, that makes us family and I’ll always catch family.”
Snappy! \o/ Love it! <3
ReplyDeleteI do, I do, I do!
It's mine. I say so. :P
TeeHee!
XD
LOL Silly Lor.
DeleteI love the details of this and how you capture both boys' emotions and viewpoints so vividly, it works though that Keandra is taking a back seat for a moment. Their collective back story intrigues me. :)
ReplyDeleteIntrigue, that's what I was going for. ;)
DeleteI'm new to this story, but my curiosity is piqued for sure. You show the little boy's imagination and enthusiasm so well.
ReplyDeleteI love the sense of family. One little typo: I picked Jacob up.
ReplyDeleteThe comment under Wisper should have gone here. oops. lol
DeleteWisper, your real comment: \o/ Awesome.
Interesting. I am curious as to where this goes. You show their bond so well. Then to throw this mysterious Master into the mix - I smell trouble there. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteGah! One always sneaks by. lol
DeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteOh now my interest is piqued. I need to know more. Good detail of the bond between brothers.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the little boy/space man scene. Positively brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shelton and William. ^^
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